Overall Comments
Excellent development from the initial idea; creating your own ‘left behinds’.
Assignment Feedback.
A story book would be the natural form for this, like the ladybird spoof books as I have complete control over the props.
Shoot some more images and include a narrative to go alongside, possibly just a time on the left page, like following a trail.
Clive thinks that my work has made a very pleasing conceptual step up and believes that it is worth pushing a little further to get the most out of it.
Coursework
My coursework is appropriate.
Research
Continue to follow previous advice and carry on adding to your wider researches and writing your responses to the ideas they reveal up to submission time.
Learning Log
The navigation is now obvious, keep up the thoughts and reflection entries too up to submission.
Learning Log for BA(hons) in Photography 